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Post by Twichpaw on May 7, 2010 21:05:41 GMT -8
Join Thunderclan! This is an advanced rp clan. Do you know what that means ? It means you need to make a super bio, and use proper grammer. Spell everything right. The bios are very complex. heres what you do.
name:
age:
clan:
peltcolor:
description: )( must be over 4 sentences, 7 sentences if your trying out to be a leader
personalty: ( must be over 4 sentences, 7 sentences if your trying out to be a leader
Rp excample: ( must be over 4 sentences, 7 sentences if your trying out to be a leader )
if you do this you can join.
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Post by shiver on Jul 10, 2010 23:12:48 GMT -8
Name:Shiverstar
Age:23 moons
Clan:thunderclan
Pelt Color:Light gray
Position:Leader
Description:Shiverstar is a light gray she-cat with dark gray paws and a white tipped tail.She has a black ear that was said to mark her kin.She has black stripes going from her back to her tail tip.She has claws that are as sharp as her tongue when hostile.She grooms herself often to keep her light gray pelt shinier.She is one tail-length wide and 2 tail-lengths long((not including her tail)).
Personality:Shiverstar is a bright she-cat that is kind to any of her clan mates.She gets strict if she has to,but eases up.She is kind enough to help any cat,especially from another clan.When she is wounded,she cares for the others before herself unless the injuries are bad.If she ends up in combat alone,she yowls to her clan for protection.She is strong but her belly is her main weak point.Shiverstar is a bit paranoid so she might glance around every once and a while.
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Post by Twichpaw on Jul 19, 2010 20:24:04 GMT -8
Good, but you missed Rpe excample, make 7 sentences on a short story about Shiverstar. Thx
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Post by M¥§Πìç on Jul 20, 2010 7:32:11 GMT -8
Name: Mysticpaw
Age: 6 Moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Pelt Color: Silver
Description: Silver fur. Black paws exepct for the one white paw one her right hind paw. Ocean blue eyes. White stripes on her back. But be warned, her claws are extremely sharp.
Personality: Loving, wonderful. Sometimes rude and mean. Will do anything to help her Clan. She obeys the warrior code like it should.
RP Example: Mysticpaw was with her mentor, training.
"Attack me" mewed her mentor.
Mysticpaw jumped up and tried to claw his face off, but failed. He moved out of the way.
"You have to do better than that." he mewed.
Mysticpaw landed flat on the ground and got back up again. Then she just stood there.
"Are you going to attack me or not?" he asked.
No reply came from Mysticpaw. Then a few moments later she ran up and manged to scracth his leg.
"Better job" her mentor grunted. "Lets go back to camp." her mentor mewed padding back to camp.
Mysticpaw nodded and followed her mentor.
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Post by Twichpaw on Jul 21, 2010 13:28:29 GMT -8
Everything but the RP example. The rp needs more detail. ( even know your the sitemaker and you can make ur own dissions ) xDDD
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Post by M¥§Πìç on Jul 22, 2010 10:55:07 GMT -8
I modified it!
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Post by Twichpaw on Jul 22, 2010 15:22:22 GMT -8
Very good. accepptied
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Post by M¥§Πìç on Jul 22, 2010 16:09:31 GMT -8
I'll just want til somebody will sign up to be my mentor.
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